Re: [RFR] templates://rtpg/{rtpg-www.templates}
To extract a unified diff, I think one can pipe to "grep '^> ' | cut -c3-"
Changes from previous version explained below:-
> --- ../rtpg.old/debian/rtpg-www.templates 2008-12-25 15:00:26.816053105 +0100
> +++ debian/rtpg-www.templates 2008-12-29 08:20:06.200052941 +0100
> @@ -1,9 +1,10 @@
> Template: rtpg-www/change_host
> Type: boolean
> Default: true
> -_Description: Do You agree to add the record to /etc/hosts?
> - This package is supplied with a variant of an adopted
> - virtual server for apache. However for this variant it is
> - needed to add a record into hosts. This tuning script can
> - do it automatically.
> +_Description: Add the virtual server to /etc/hosts?
> + This package may define a virtual server in the httpd configuration.
> + .
> + For this to be fully functional, an entry is needed
> + in the /etc/hosts file for the virtual server. This operation
> + can be made automatic by enabling this option.
Simplify the question. Do not call the httpd Apache. Avoid passive
voice. "enable" rather than "choose".
> --- ../rtpg.old/debian/control 2008-12-25 15:00:26.816053105 +0100
> +++ debian/control 2008-12-29 08:21:10.956052713 +0100
> @@ -10,7 +10,5 @@
> Depends: librpc-xml-perl, libjson-xs-perl, libjs-jquery, libtemplate-perl,
> rtorrent (>= 0.7.9), apache2, debconf, libapache2-mod-scgi
> Description: web based front end for rTorrent
> - RTPG (rtorrent perl gui) is a simple GUI web for rtorrent. It allows to
> - scan/delete/add torrents and also to set the priority to the certain
> - torrents or their parts.
> -
> + RTPG (rtorrent perl gui) is a simple web interface for rtorrent. Users
> + can scan/delete/add torrents and set their respective priorities.
Rephrase to remove "it allows to ..." which would need a pronoun after
"allows" and then it wouldn't add any meaning.
Hope that helps,
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