Re: Question on title and explanation of shuffles
Osamu Aoki wrote:
> I have one question.
> 1.2. Programs you need for development
> 1.3. Documentation needed for development
> Can these use the same style? Only 1.3 was changed by you.
> I wonder if I have to change to:
> 1.2. Programs needed for development
Oh yes, "needed" works for both. I wasn't trying very hard to reduce
the number of second person pronouns (and this is a use of "you" where
it makes sense to see it as "generic"), but I suspect after all the
uses of second person in 1.2 I was more sensitive to it in the title
of 1.3...
> But the way, here are what I did after pondering on your comments.
> (URL link should work after 4 hours.)
I'll have another look then.
--
JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
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