Bom dia, Paulo e Leandro. On Sat, Jun 10, 2023 at 11:45:39AM -0300, Paulo Henrique de Lima Santana wrote: > Leandro, > > Agora a pouco subi uma nova versão do arquivo em inglês pq ele sofreu > algumas alterações na última hora. > > https://salsa.debian.org/publicity-team/announcements/-/blob/master/pt/drafts/bookworm-release.wml > > Então você vai precisar revisar a sua tradução antes de mandar pra cá a > versão final. O diff é bem pequeno, vejam: diff --git a/pt/drafts/bookworm-release.wml b/pt/drafts/bookworm-release.wml index 898cc8b..b2777ea 100644 --- a/pt/drafts/bookworm-release.wml +++ b/pt/drafts/bookworm-release.wml @@ -177,17 +177,11 @@ the Debian website. </p> <p> -To install Debian 12 <q>bookworm</q> directly onto your -computer's hard disk you can choose from a variety of installation media -such as Blu-ray Disc, DVD, CD, USB stick, or via a network connection. -Several desktop environments — Cinnamon, GNOME, KDE Plasma Desktop and -Applications, LXDE, LXQt, MATE and Xfce — may be installed through those -images. -In addition, <q>multi-architecture</q> CDs are available which support -installation from a choice of architectures from a single disc. Or you can -always create bootable USB installation media -(see the <a href="$(HOME)/releases/bookworm/installmanual">Installation Guide</a> -for more details). +To install Debian 12 <q>bookworm</q> directly onto your computer's storage +device you can choose from a variety of installation media types to <a href="https://www.debian.org/download";>Download</a> +such as: Blu-ray Disc, DVD, CD, USB stick, or via a network connection. + +See the <a href="$(HOME)/releases/bookworm/installmanual">Installation Guide</a> for more details. </p> # Translators: some text taken from: Então, se quiser mandar a tradução que havia feito, podemos adicionar essas alterações na revisão. Abraços, Charles
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