Re: Rewording of NM-corner (WAS: Re: Third call for votes for the debian project leader election 2006)

[Wolfgang Lonien <wolfgang@lonien.de>]

cobaco (aka Bart Cornelis) wrote:

> Comments?
> 
>>>>> begin rewording proposal
> The Debian New Maintainer process, is the process of becoming an official
> Debian Developer (DD). These webpages are the place were prospective Debian

Hi Bart,

looks very nice to me. One minor thing: does "The Debian New Maintainer
process, is the process of becoming an official Debian Developer (DD)."
really need a comma? I'm not a native english speaker myself; maybe
someone else could comment this?

The rest is just great, and for me - as still a beginner and therefore,
an "outsider" - easily understandable. I would (as a DD) nod on and sign
this ;-)

Thanks for your work,
cheers,
wjl aka Wolfgang Lonien
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